Ms_Kimmykim
hii ive been writing for years and ive been struggling with how i write. like for example, people say make unimportant things that don't help the story brief and that's what i've been following. but at the same time i dont know whether i should write those unimportant things out or not because i dont want to spend a whole three paragraphs talking about someone's morning routine i usually make it brief. But i just can't seem to agree with myself on keeping it the way it is now or actually writing out the unimportant things if you get what i mean?
Ms_Kimmykim
yess here’s one
“Harmony hummed the tune of the song All girls are the same by Juice Wrld as she moisturized her skin, freshly out the shower. Once she was done, she slipped on a loose oversized white- T shirt with some black shorts. Feeling lazy, she just slipped her curly hair into a messy bun with two curly strands hanging down.
"Another ho got me finished, broke my heart oh no you didn't." Harmony sang lowly as she got out her room and walked down the curved elegant stairway to the kitchen.
Walking further into the kitchen, Harmony saw her mother, Tatyana in the kitchen over the stove preparing something. Harmony looked around the kitchen seeing many pots and foil wrapped dishes on counters.
"Hey mommy, what you doing?" Harmony questioned as she walked over to the refrigerator and grabbed a bottle of iced water from the freezer.
Tatyana swiped the sweat off her forehead from the steam rising from the pot. "I'm preparing food. We have a barbecue tomorrow at Auntie Nicole's house in Queens." She continued mixing the pot of spaghetti.
Nicole was Tatyana's best friend who they'd go spend some time together with every long break from school that Harmony had. It was Summer Break so it was likely that they'd be spending more time than just a simple barbecue.
"Oh that's exciting. How long are we spending there?" Harmony asked as she took her last sip from her water bottle and put it back in the fridge. “
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glochanellyyy
Hey! Honestly me personally I get my writing from movies, you know how movies doesn’t really go deep into details all the time but from time to time they do? I just mainly go off movies and how they have it all set up. But can you give me an example scene from story? So I can try to help
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sippingmochitae4
GIRLLL U CAN WRITE I LOVE HER BEAUTIFUL SCREAMS SO MUCH I DIDNT REALISE YOU WROTE BLOOD AND SHADOWS it’s TOO GOOD I HAVE ATTACHMENT ISSUES TO BOTH BOOKS NOW
YOU DID YOUR THING
weaslee
Hey beautiful Author/Reader! In the spirit of Halloween here’s something witchy for you!
She was born from witchfinders.
He was born from the hunted.
Now their bloodlines are bound by something ancient—
and something watching.
Blood remembers. Always.
Wishing you light and wisdom! let me know what you think
https://www.wattpad.com/story/403065982?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=weaslee
Aza33Poo
I love your stories I would love to read more
Woahh_zhoriaa
When we gon get a update for after hoursss