No offense but I would think if you were so good at writing sex scene's or "smut" as you claim to be you would be following the queen of R rated books @kanyeinteruptedme. I'm merely suggesting you read her work and see proper "smut"
Hey! I really like the reverends daughter and i just wanted to ask when are you going to update it because i really want to know whats going to happen and i can't wait! :D