Okurrr, so, about ur story, here is my honest advice to you.
1)If you want more readers, add more tags to ur story, tags that make sense, add the members names, ships, if there’s smut? Add Enhypensmut tag, that will help people find ur story.
2) get rid of the “narrator -“ and just write what’s going on, as is. Also put more descriptive words, like, I think it’s very fast paste and a lot is happening really fast, slow it down and expand.
3) ADD QUOTATION MARKS PLEASE! They make it so much easier and aesthetically pleasing to know that someone is speaking. I think rather than writing the members names every minute, like this- ‘Niki-I think I’ll confess today’ do it like this- “I think-“ he looked down shyly, ears heating up as he thought about the pretty boy that made his cold heart warm, “I’ll confess my feeling for him today” Niki finally let out.
4) when you add photos to the top of the chapter, make them make sense to the story, I didn’t get hanni?
5) too many ‘!’ Are being used, also in the wrong places.
6) try not to use emojis in writing, it will make it look unserious and rushed
