Kardia_Kyros

Yooooooooooooooooo! Thank yoooou for the reading and voting my story! ;-; I hope you enjoyed It!
          
          (Even though It's not that good and might have some plot holes, which I'm gonna fix It later.)
          
          Again, thank you very very much for reading my story! :D

PA1110

Thanks for the star my friend

god99999

@PA1110 okay I will do so.
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PA1110

(*shrugs*) i do not know if i would call ot a good story. It is my very first work on any format like that(creating a croosover story ),english isn't my first language (and as you can imagine that creates some problems when i want to describe something etc) and it is evolvilng along with my better comprehension on the whole writing a story. If you see the very first chapters(which i will have to rework since they need it). So yeah any kind of critique is welcome as long as you can explain your what you either don't/do like and questions you might have. I might not answer right away at all times but i will try at the very least~
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god99999

@PA1110 of course your story is very good it deserves the star .
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