gogo12221

reamended
          	
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gogo12221

This chapter feels incredibly real and heartfelt. You’ve done such a great job capturing the raw emotions between Sevilay and Cihan in the aftermath of their night together. The way you described the setting—the sunlight streaming in, the tangled sheets, and the discarded clothes—creates a vivid and intimate atmosphere that draws the reader in right away.
          
          What stands out the most is how natural their emotions and interactions feel. The hesitation, the unspoken tension, and their struggle to process what happened all come across as genuine and relatable. I really appreciated the balance between their vulnerability and the quiet moments of connection, like Cihan reaching for her hand or promising she wouldn’t face things alone. It felt romantic, but not in an overdone way—more like two people trying to navigate something complicated and real.
          
          The dialogue also flows beautifully. It’s sincere without being too polished, which makes it easy to connect with both characters. I especially loved how you ended on a note of fragile hope—it’s not a perfect resolution, but it feels honest and leaves room for growth between them. This chapter really captures the romantic aspect without losing the emotional depth, and it’s a pleasure to read.
          
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