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heya guys!! ive been following this work for a while.
          
          and was inspired to start writing my own as well. but idk how to improve it. could you guys read and give me suggestions?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/379420169-the-legend-of-scarlett

Lol
          Sorry to be blunt
          But alpha's mate is a shitty story.
          
          U let the alpha torture his soulmate into almost death for years, n just in a few days u made the omega accept to give him another chance? Without the alpha proving himself?
          Haha weird
          But if that's what u believe in, cool.
          May be u like the alpha side of the story and his entitlement.

Histoire, your story. 
          Was amazing first time I cried during a story. Honestly I found not know how but  we could felt  all  the emotions. You did a great job. Thank you

I hope you update soon.
          I also hope your doing good and hope that you keep making stories soon!

i like ur book much..please do another one..god bless

Are you ok??

Please update 

 I love your story ❤️please write again , love from  

I read this though out the night, not necessarily the right decision,not a ounce of sleep but it's worth it. Love it so much♥️

The story was wonderful but deep reminding people of abuse, I live through it I can relate had me in tears