I read your profile. Learning to write is a craft and you need to take help wherever you can find it. It is s good idea to take a writing course, even a free one, to understand some of the principles as having a good story is not enough. You need to know how to make it readable.
Thanks for adding THE VISITOR to your reading list. It is hard SF, which means very accurate science, realistic situations and believable characters.
It tells of a dynamic woman astronaut who finds something unexpected on the first space-junk elimination mission. It goes on to change her life and the world.
Hope you enjoy it, but also hope you can learn from the way sentences and paragraphs are constructed and how much care is taken over spelling and grammar. I'm only a reasonable amateur, but work very hard to produce a good story in a readable format.
As you search Wattpad you'll find some pretty awful stuff out there. The best way to improve is to invite comment and always listen to it. You might not agree with it, but you should always listen to it.
Good luck.
