goldgoblingamer

Also who is that in the picture?

VelocityF115

Random persons picture I found on pintrest
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VelocityF115

I published my first story

ughragnir

Yeah but you still use paragraphs even if it isn't mentioned originally right?
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goldgoblingamer

yeah I guess but that's just how I right my stories
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ughragnir

@goldgoblingamer 
            
            You're not giving good advice.
            The advice you should be giving him / her isn't necessarily how much words are present in the story but rather how it is written.
            
            The story isn't written in paragraphs hence already making readers click off as it isn't organised and is instead messy. Chapters can be less than 1000 words, it doesn't matter - what matters is the quality of what is in the wordings of the chapter.
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VelocityF115

Lee I told

goldgoblingamer

@assassinjack also thanks for changing you profile picture
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