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me every month: is my cover…. attractive enough??? no?? 
          	
          	*remakes cover for the thousandth time but better each time in order to attract more readers* 
          	
          	(stay tuned for new cover lmao)

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don’t mind me, just editing and nitpicking at the few chapters i have left to add more background information and funnier lines. and to make my writing less choppy. 
          
          
          I know I wrote chapter one a while ago, but how did no one think about this quote:
          
          “ I wasn't stupid, I knew enough about movies and books that nothing good ever just comes to anyone on a CHEESE platter without a terrible sacrifice or loss.” 
          
          -WHAT WAS I THINKING PUTTING CHEESE IN THERE THATS NOT HOW THE SAYING GOES OMG ISHSBSBSSBSHS 
          i was craving ig

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why did i never check the grammar in the damn synopsis.... this is so embarrassing wtf Im editing it rn 
          
          
          ugh wtf fatal is spelled fetal and thats literally the second word BYE im never writing again hahahahah

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@thecryingrose omg thankyou haha I’ll try to remember that
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I can’t believe I actually won the first contest I’ve submitted a book into AHH although ur girl got a bangin C+ that means that I can improve and I got some constructive criticism which made me feel sooo good like ik I can do better on this story and i gotta put more time into making this baby so it can have over 100 views !!! If anyone wants to give constructive criticism on my book I would literally love it please shoot me a PM of what i’m doing wrong and right! I always massively edit my chapters before I publish but it seems like I have more work to do sooo please be patient with chapter 4 comin yall❤️❤️ xxx