goodlilbadlilme

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ANY TIPS on how to force that first sentence out? Like I've been wracking my brain against the wall here trying to start! Got my soundtrack setup to write but I've got like 10 different ideas on "how-to NOT fuck up and actually reel in readers with an adrenaline- action pumping scene but then debating on which characters to focus on first, then transition to the "you" or visa-versa and still keep the mystery and suspense and aaaarrgghh in second perspective like gawd damn it -- how'd I get to be such an idjit?" kind of deal

goodlilbadlilme

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"Songs to listen to while I fuck up" is such a vibe tho haha
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goodlilbadlilme

I'll check out those backseat lovers! FR but, damn, you're so epic for expanding on this whole crazy bit! 
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goodlilbadlilme

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ANY TIPS on how to force that first sentence out? Like I've been wracking my brain against the wall here trying to start! Got my soundtrack setup to write but I've got like 10 different ideas on "how-to NOT fuck up and actually reel in readers with an adrenaline- action pumping scene but then debating on which characters to focus on first, then transition to the "you" or visa-versa and still keep the mystery and suspense and aaaarrgghh in second perspective like gawd damn it -- how'd I get to be such an idjit?" kind of deal

goodlilbadlilme

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"Songs to listen to while I fuck up" is such a vibe tho haha
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goodlilbadlilme

I'll check out those backseat lovers! FR but, damn, you're so epic for expanding on this whole crazy bit! 
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spn_lover_666

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@goodlilbadlilme I can help! 
            Although I’m not the best at writing action scenes, I like to focus on psychological action with my pacing. 
            So instead of saying someone reached for a cigarette, I’ll start the scene with them fumbling around inside their jacket pocket— peeking their 
          head down to look for something that their fingers couldn’t feel. 
            And then I’ll pretend like I’m in the moment, like I’m actually there. You can do that from first person or from omniscient…from any angle I think. 
            I’m not the best writer. But I’m a great thinker. So I put myself inside the scene mentally…I even channel whatever it was that inspired me (watching supernatural) 
          
          Anyways, sorry for all the Yada Yada. I need you to know something. 
            Throw that soundtrack out the window, let a car smash it, and create a new one…one called “Songs to listen to while I fuck up.” 
            Because, fucking up is always more fun than the alternative…not writing. 
            You strike me as someone who is methodical about writing. You are caught in the details. Maybe you’re second guessing yourself…maybe there are gaps that need to be filled that you don’t know yet for plot points and Yada Yada. 
          
          But that’s okay. Leave it raw, unpolished. And leave it YOU. Because you’re epic, okay? :) music helps too! I love the backseat lovers—their lines are exquisite and the instruments sing right along with the lyrics. 

goodlilbadlilme

Dropped a couple of hella short-ass teasers to buy me some more time!  Before I can get a full chapter up haha because damn myself for having to go back and downsize my ambitions and rework my fanfic into something more manageable with a higher potential of getting “finished” sooo….yahhhh

goodlilbadlilme

Hey guys!
          
          Just got some momentum back in my writing and published THE STORY behind When Monster Becomes You: A Supernatural Fanfiction! I’ve also included trigger warnings AND a meticulously curated “mixtape” for this specific story, so please CHECK IT OUT! 
          
          Love comments, and I do reply back, so feel free to stop on by :)

spn_lover_666

You’re so welcome for the follow :) thank YOU for reading my stories ! 

goodlilbadlilme

@spn_lover_666 Well thank you so much for the follow first! I’ve been such a SPN fan for a long time, but now am wanting to give back to the Dean-and-Sam-loving community :) Am eager to continue reading your works!
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goodlilbadlilme

Dropping a fresh, out-of-the-freezer story in your laps like a Hit and Run. Just let it defrost OK ❄️ 
          
          Also let me know if you're getting any story updates/notifications from me, if you're following obv. Apparently some of you are having some notification issues from me?
          
          So I sent my concerns to the Wattpad Team this morning, since I've published like midnight last night. yikes

Ae0nexe

@goodlilbadlilme yeah that's really weird. i got this but like I texted you wattpad didn't notify me about your published story 
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WalkerGraves

Thank you for your vote on Chapter 1 of The Graveyard Song. I know it starts off a little slow, but when it takes off...hold on.

goodlilbadlilme

@WalkerGraves Peaked my interest again :) I'll be sure to add that one to my library too, thanks!
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WalkerGraves

It's my latest complete book. I've started a new one called Summer Stray (that has much shorter chapters). It's a slow burn, too. You would think it's a romance or rom/com for a while. But, when the plot opens up in later chapters, it gets a little crazy. Unexpected twist.
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goodlilbadlilme

@WalkerGraves Re-replying because I didn't get the chance to read all of it before sending a vote your way! Well deserved, might I add, before I got to the end of Chapter One! Is TGS your latest book?
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