goxrua

I’m trying to improve my writing. If you read this, I’d really appreciate a few lines of feedback about what you liked or what could be stronger.

kiapoetry_

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          Hey I'm kia, If you like reading a poem you can try this collection of poems showing a human flow of emotion and I would love to get your feedback or any story you want to share....I love to experiment with my writing skills....and get inspired....thank you.
          
          And sorry for popping up without your permission.

Cosmic_dragon1000

@goxrua  @KRISHNABEHEN ... Okk guys relax now... I have more words to counter.  Let other defenders too have something to say.. 

KRISHNABEHEN

@VarunzHaights Umm... Not going to write for sometime as I am busy in my work. Will give a small rest to my phone too. Will write after sometime.
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Cosmic_dragon1000

Please have patience and post your statements in last two hours of the debate... 
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