Kayln1123

Hiya! I just read your story "All The Things They Kept From Me" and I'm really enjoying it so far. You have a unique writing style and it's not very often I come across a writer who uses second person narrative. One thing to be aware of though is that you've switched tenses from past tense to present tense which is noticeable in your first chapter and there are a few minor grammatical errors. But other than that, it's really good. 
          If you have some spare time could you check out my story "Aeonian".

Kayln1123

You're most welcome and don't worry, I've done that in the past as well where I've switched tenses.
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gracerfoot

@Kayln1123 thanks for taking the time to read through my story!!! Of course I'll read "Aeonian" when I have some time.  Also yeah my tense go all over the place and sometimes, I really need to work on that.
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AelynStray

Hello! I'm a little late on this but welcome to wattpad!!! I just read your story 'All The Things They Kept From Me' and I think that it is wonderful so far. I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading one of my works, I could use some more feedback on it. It's titled 'Alive or Living'. Thank you, keep writing!

gracerfoot

I actually have not, I'll have to go look.
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AelynStray

@Ryn_Koala you're in theater? That's awesome! You've probably seen my post about choir...
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gracerfoot

Sorry I realized I put "paragraph" instead of "chapter" oops!!
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