Graham Porter

Hi All,
          
          Well firstly, thanks to everyone who read the initial drafts of chapters one and two.
          
          I have rewritten Xan’s story from scratch and this time I have started from the very beginning. Every single word is new and I hope it reads a lot better. It now feels like it is all about Xan, his motivations and how he sees his world and his life.
          
          I would love to hear what you think of it. I would also love to get as many reads votes and comments as possible.
          
          Thanx G
          

Hi all, I have reworded chapter two and have also included more detail about Xanten’s A.I. project. Hope it now reads better and also conveys better the intended meaning.

Hey all, Chapter two is now posted. I have introduced two new characters and given some more back story to the protagonist the brilliant young scientist Xanten Pax. Hope you love it and understand a little more of Xan’s motivations and you are also interested to wonder where this story may go next.

@graham37 Haha yeah, just a little bit. 

@jewel1307 
          
          Hey Jewel - no problem - is was very evocative stuff! 

Hi I've just dropped by to say thanks for becoming a fan and for checking out my poetry. =]
          

Thanks for fanning! Have fun!

 @LuisLugo What are your favourite books Luis, are you into others genres as well ?

Hi Luis, thank you for the message. I'm very pleased you found it interesting. I don't have a timetable, but I will keep you posted as to when chapter two comes out. So you are a Sci-Fi fan then, great genre isn't it! 

@graham37 Just wanted to stop by and say thanks for becoming a fan.  Hope you continue to enjoy my work.  Please feel free to comment on the stories you read and let me know what you like, or dislike about them.  Have a good one, . .