greedyren

I’m in the process of completely re writing King Of The Court because originally let’s be honest it was a mess :’) 

ilovecowsmorethanyou

I read all chapters of king of the court and honestly im quite impressed, the story was intriguing. I only have one tip, make sure to revise your chapters completely before posting them, there were a few minor errors with spelling and grammar, but all in all a very good start. I have a book called forgotten friendships which is also a bl, if you have time to read it and give me some feedback too, I’d be very grateful. 

greedyren

very bad habit of mine to not fully look through the whole chapter and edit it hopefully planning to go back at the end of the book and completely edit the parts where i messed up lol english isn’t my first language so i’m having a bit of a difficult time remembering all the rules dealing speech feel free to comment on sentences i’ve messed up on : ))  i’m currently cramming for pre-tests before my finals so i’ll be sure to check out your book sometime this weekend : ) 
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