MarinaBStorm
Hi if you do a second book when you get to the scene where finns at the party will you add a part of the scene where when he spots the oil thugs he also spots his sister and sneaks down to where she is without being spotted by anyone semi kidnaps her and asks what she's doing there and explains he's on a mission she then explains that she's there for the world grand prix and the scene ends with finn trying to convince her not to take part but Rachel ends up saying she will take part and there's nothing he can do to change her mind and fin says he won't try to convince her otherwise but yes that she keeps safe and if she feels in any danger to call him straight away and goes back to the party.
I know it's quite a long scene description but I just had an idea for that scene and I just had to get it out before I forget it. Anyway I would love to see a new book soon mainly because I loved the first one so much.
