Hey!! This is my first I've writing, well on watt pad. I wanted some tips and pointers to make my fanfic better and more enjoyable to read. I would like to see y'all's perspective and how you think the story should go on. To let you know this is a one direction fanfic its a little different than others but that was the point. The member I am writing about is Harry!! Please keep reading and I hope you enjoy!! :)