Thank you very much for all of the comments on my story! They help a lot and mean a lot! I've been thinking alot about your suggestions like: "more about the dad" and" the moms violence" and "a new boy to make Alex jealous" and it's helping me unravel ideas about the story. I've been making short chapters because I wasn't aware of the amount of writing it took to make a couple pages, haha. But i've been gradually, hopefully, fixing that. Also, I'll make another chapter in a week. I've been working from 6:30 to 5:30 every single day for a few works, kinda brutal. But that's done. But anyway, thank you for your comments and your support. Means a lot!