guddughosh1234

Hi. Would you mind checking out my new chapter? 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1322893256?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Pee_Chee&wp_originator=qlNg2caMQCeCOLsRnWxTOt2X9a7E6mYUihU31grKCTfn20NWuQ9a1mw04dPFoaxJCexSooq3iXy0U%2FymRn5NfdmOAgjH37kdkXGwWGRHvgIQ5EEdkRrtXHsaYGDvjA5M

boleh dong minta saran dan kritiknyaa
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/208778299-mist-before-dawn

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