When I said that it wouldn't make sense in my future chapters this is what I meant, so if you read the book you would all know what happened to Max, well later one Gia would tell him that he would put the moonstone back because it powers the magic in the hollow Earth and without it the hollow Earth would be gone, but the thing is that Gia is the one who told Max that he need the moonstone to be able to become an alpha, so I wanted to rewrite it, actually I think I was going to remove the alpha thing. For Daughter of Lou I also planned that out, but then I got writers block for one of the chapters I was gonna write next, like I said, I had the idea to the story for each chapter just not for every chapter, but then when I reread I feel like I should have done better with the story, one of them is Lou's explanation, the curse dolls, the name of the city, and how I should have done better with why the characters kept declining their kindness, and how I basically didn't add all the characters, ok this one I should I kept a lost to who was their, honestly I forgot Nolan was in this story, and barely almost all the characters didn't speak much like Lucky Bat, Babo, Wage, sometimes Kitty, Tuesday and Lydia had a few words to say, the only characters that spoke the most were Moxy, Ox, Sometimes Mandy, or Lou, like in that group specifically, and I remember making Tuesday the bad guy right away, and half of the conversations in that story barely made sense, half of it like you understand the conversation that they are having but then it barely makes sense once you find out what it leads to like the topic yes but the choice of worlds can make it confusing.