Hey all, I'd just like to say that I will be editing the first chapter of Awoken again and you may want to re-read it, although there is only a few slight changes. The reason for this is that I've already written every chapter to Awoken, and at the moment I am just thoroughly editing them and re-writing them. However, while re-writing the second chapter, there were a lot of things I realised I needed to correct in the first... It's your choice if you want to re-read the first chapter or not, but I'd recommend it.
Also, please don't tell me this is unprofessional or something, for that would be I'm not a professional writer. I post my stories on here not as a complete book ready for publishing, but to get constructive criticism and any feedback I can. Okay, thank you! x