Ivashkov20

hi!
          My friend just started a book called, 'letting it go.' I was hoping if you could check it out and leave her some feedback as it would be extremely helpful for her. It's alright if you are busy. have a amazing day<3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/275269403?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ivashkov20&wp_originator=eAWGuCRIatuyFEe8GF%2BMEa4fUPJ%2FyeSZbXNC5z6SMBN3oZODAYt1CRCUB6XqWgm7ywTlfGsmjXDM7AwOczg8jEafc%2F40SjqFH3agMnXtw0YZboen%2FO3QQnar4A2x7YaV

MelonSnail

Hi! MelonSnail here!
          
          I just started writing my first book and I would appreciate it so much if you could check it out. I will try to update the next chapters as soon as possible:)
          
          https://my.w.tt/A4Mqb8E7k5
          
          As this is my first book and I'm also not a native English speaker, I would really appreciate some constructive criticism if possible (I'm aware that I'm probably not the best writer but I'd love to improve!).
          
          Have a lovely day and stay safe with corona going on!