h0m1es4life

Hey dude not gonna lie to you izuku legit slowly killing me cause all my give him a quirk instead train himself to be second quirkless hero. The reason why I said second because knuckle duster.

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@RomeoJaramillo Yes, all of that + comics are exactly what I'm intending to do with Phantom Raven.

@h0m1es4life HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA I-I CAN'T....MOMO BROKE HAHHAHAHA...THE LOVE TRIANGLE....YOU ARE OFFICIALLY THE BEST BATMAN X MHA WRITER I'VE EVER MET AND READ ABOUT. You might as well be Gray in real life with how far you've planned your story, though that's a natural thing to do as a writer.

@Smiles754 Yes. And to answer your earlier question, I already intend for Gray to have some sort of love triangle thing between Itsuka and Setsuna. Or rather, since Gray would still be a bit clueless about what love is, it would be like a little funny rivalry between the two of them who would always try to one up each other on who can catch Gray's attention better or who can teach him love first.
            
            And I also intend for him to have a bit of a funny dynamic with Momo. During Gray's attempt to be charming, he would practice in a faux auction of some kind and he was competing with Momo Yaoyorozu. And every time the girl would offer  some '100.00 yen', Gray would quickly follow that up with '100.001 yen', making the rich girl just a teeny little annoyed. And in the end, Gray would just straight call her broke to her face. It would be a very jarring and bewildering feeling for Momo to actually be called 'broke'. She had been called 'rich girl', 'nepo baby', or 'paid to be in the hero course girl', but never 'broke'.
            
            I was also thinking that, like Batman, Gray would have multiple lovers. One day during school prom, Gray just walks in with two complete hot and random women by his side or it being Itsuka and Setsuna. With Kaminari and Mineta falling onto the floor in despair wailing, "It should've been me! Not him!"

@Smiles754 Also about the romantic interest thing, I apologise for forgetting about Kendo.

@h0m1es4life *Cries from absolute peak* It's beautiful. I need that interaction of Eri and Kota in the story. Also it's fine if Eri gets rescued by Izuku, cause now that I think about it, Kota seems to have Robin potential to become a "Wolf" (I heard somewhere that Ravens follow wolves to hunt better, but that could or may not be true). And for me to glaze your book, a friendly reminder that you're writing a great fanfic about a Batman type character in the world of MHA, of course I'm going to glaze it!

@Smiles754 Thanks for your review! I've actually been really curious and wanting to know what people think about the Phantom Raven. And sorry for not posting a chapter of the fic for a long while. I was busy with Despicable Deku and other fics on Ao3. But, if it makes you feel better, I'm actually working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully you'll stay tuned. (And, to be shameless, plz glaze it more so I'm more motivated to write it lol. I've just gotten off a writer's block about how the next chapter is gonna go lmao.)
            
            But, if you don't mind being spoiled a bit, I want to correct something about this: "Though I wonder how he'll adopt Eri, and yes, I know he will, just seems right."
            
            Eri will still be with Izuku. Instead, Gray gets Kota. Now hold on, let me cook. Imagine this: Eri and Kota having a wholesome argument about which one of their 'dads' are better.
            
            "Dekiru is so strong!" Says Eri.
            "But Phantom Raven is much more cooler!" Says Kota.
            
            All the while, both Izuku and Gray secretly listens in on the conversation from above or something. Izuku amused and bashful, while Gray remains stoic as usual.
            
            What do you think?  Sorry for the late response, btw.

@Smiles754 Plus, just realized Despicable Deku can be described as this: "It's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen in my life...it's a banana next to a banana!"