Hiba Jihad Msheirfeh

hii so am back with another story tell me what do you think https://www.wattpad.com/story/195316607

I know i am not that famous on wattpad but i hope that someone will read my story and comment on it because i love writing and when i see that people are critizing my work and reading it i will be pleasent to me. So please read and vote so i can have a hope to continue my work.
          Thanks 

Hii guys i started with the 2nd chapter in my story hope you like it 
          Heres my acounts
          Facebook: hiba msheirfeh
          Email: hiba.msheirfeh@yahoo.com

I am new at wattbad and writing my first story.
          i wish you all to read my story and give me a small hope of continuing it
          love u. thanks