I love your story idea. I'm always into love hexagons, making this an interesting one i've read before. I got 2 questions:
1. Will your story have Provs for a character?
2. Will Flora still be engaged with Wren?
I ship all 5 boys with Flora... Even though thats the point of the story.
I think this story is great, wait not great, its awarding winning.
See what I did there?