LoveTriangle_Bitch
Hi, sorry to bother but I just posted 3 chapters of my new Rehyuck book, can you give me your opinion on it?
LoveTriangle_Bitch
@haechanniessunflower Yes I do it on purpose, I always had problems with my tense so I'll work on it. Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback ( ◜‿◝ )♡
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haechanniessunflower
@LoveTriangle_Bitch there were a ton of sentences without punctuation but im assuming that was on purpose..? Some words were in the wrong tense, you could broaden your word choice a bit, for example not just saying "said," and use a bit more detail to further develop the story. Other than that though, i like the concept and it was very interesting, there should be way more angel/demon fics in the world. The pacing was good and i think your readers will be looking forward to the next chapter so keep going~
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