hailbird27

@ElegantAngel youre welcome :D
          	

hailbird27

@ElegantAngel With Just One Look is really really good! i dont know why people are only reading the first chapter...i really enjoyed reading it. ive never read a story like this before so i like youre originality. and i also like how in youre summary you ended it with a question. i like doing that. i feel like it makes the reader wonder and it got me wanting to read it even more than the title did. youre a great writer. keep it up :)
          

ElegantAngel

hey! i was hoping you could check out my story and maybe give me some feed back? :) it would mean a lot if you read through it (its pretty short) because people seem to just look at the first chapter :( its called With Just One Look