hal1238

@Kfargo thank you! And I will :)

Kay-KAylalala

@hal1238 Thank you! And Okay, i'll try to check them out later. I will warn you though, I'm very serious about critique so I might comment and critique your story harshly, but that doesn't mean I don't like it, only that I see potential in it and I know that there are things you could do to make it better :)