@JoelleNader it's very well writen so far and I'm loving the plot allready even though your only one chapter in but just remember to always start sentences with capitols! And that your putting your quotation marks in the right spot so it doesn't look like the characters are saying something aloud when it's actually the author informing the reader what and who they are saying it to. Other than that I look forward to reading your book, and keep up the great writing!!
@hannaalways I know<3 yeah I have some mistakes and I Will correct them,anytime soon<3 I am Greek and I am not the best in English<3 But having potential,it means a lot to me,omg thank you so much hgstfvjhdfsfcgfc omg<3<3
@ilydily your book has so much potential and I am inlove with it but it would make it a lot easier on reading if you went through and fixed some punctuation, but other than that keep up the writing!