@hannerbananner
It okay with how much break you need. Writing is important and it takes a lot of time, patients, rereading, and editing to get it to where you are completely done and proud of yourself for doing it to publish the chapter/book. I've already completed a book with 14 parts but 10 actual chapters of the book and I'm working on the sequal of it. And it's taking forever. So don't rush your work. If you are gonna work on Avery again, can you keep the father/daughter relationship between avery and Sam? If so, kick Emily out. Just kick her out. I also can't wait until she meets the Cullens and I want her to have a bond with each of them as well. Rosalie and Emmett can her godparents, Jasper and Alice can be her aunt and uncle, Carlisle and Esme can ber her grandparents, and Edward can be her big brother.