mermaid741
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Heyyy there! Can you please check out my story? https://www.wattpad.com/story/355865527?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=mermaid741&wp_originator=Z8ZfeihhjdCgCinkOzoqRYQNB41YB7%2B1uSWLE8iM7Q4Yp%2BkCAtdQDGWHBdUeiDlI7i9l6xi0pLVtklQTcew9c0LzNzItc1D82QSGpBHNTleq%2F%2BP68fs6793MxxJj2MxL Thanks, it would mean a lot<3
mermaid741
@mermaid741 I just published "Sense" of my story "the beginning of us". https://www.wattpad.com/1419722513?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=mermaid741
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mermaid741
@mermaid741 Thank you so much, I'm very inspired by feedback. I'll take that into consideration. The next chapter will posted later tonight. Happy reading!
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happyandhabiapervs
@mermaid741 Helloooo :) I just finished reading the 15 chapters currently in your book, I really like some of the ideas and cute moments you have written. I would recommend that you develop the scenes and conversations more because the story kind of jumps from one idea to another without properly transitioning to each making the story very past paste. Other then that thank you for recommending your book<3
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