harleys_sister

Okay so I've added on to my poems and I would love it if I got some criticism on them. So pass them around to others who enjoy poetry please!

Hey lovelies my book "red sneakers" is.  No longer on hold I haven't finished it I started over so things did change and I would love love love feed back from you guys now keep in mind I'm only on the third chapter and I really need to know if I should keep going , anyway long I know but tell your friends too ok? Love you guys 

Hi \(^-^)
          Can you pretty please check out my poetry book called Untangled Thought. It would mean a lot to me only because ive been working really hard on it just to share it with others who would be able to relate to it. A simple  comment vote or follow would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

I've seem to be pulled into the world of poetry and I don't think I'm good enough to publish but I have so plz go check it out and tell me what you think 

I can't help but think that my books are just not working with plot and are going to fast in details and all the other stuff help read my books and comment on what I need to change to make the chapter longer and the characters more vivid and detailed!!!!

Working on a new book wish me luck !!!!!!

@sloanranger  u r very welcome and it's nice to meet u too
          

Thank you & very nice to meet you : ))

I made a new book it's called "dreams of a blurry mind " and it is about the interesting dreams I've had I have one chapter ( one dream ) written down so I hope u like it and if you do don't forget to share with others and comment 
          

I hope you 
          like my stories as much as I like yours