Hey so I deleted chapter nine.. it had the sexual scene and I felt like it was too rushed. I was too focused on when other writers put in scenes like that so I felt like I should do it too. I realized that it didn't help my plot in any way, and I didn't like how it was written. I took the sexual scene out of chapter nine, and now I have a draft for the NEW chapter nine. It should be published soon. If you have any confusion, just message me. Sorry again, I figured that I'm still early enough in the book to be able to be changing things..