important update!!! I just finished editing the first act of crucio (prisoner of Azkaban) and it was so fun!! I changed lots of stuff so I recommend going back and having a look, I rewrote almost every chapter and added loads of new scenes between aurora and other characters!!! some of the new bits that got added was:
- aurora only joins quidditch team this year
- I showed the scene in shrieking shack where sirius asks the golden trio not to tell her about him.
-mcgonagall and lupin looking out for aurora throughout the year
-aurora, Theo, and Draco moments as I wrote before but never explained properly into that they used to hang out when they were younger in the books.
- aurora going to hogsmeade, and the quidditch matches (which was all things I just never wrote in the original draft).
- less of harry sort of acting like he was in love with aurora from the first chapter, I wrote more of their friendship and how his was starting to turn into a crush.
- hermione/aurora not getting along in third year that much as they only click in fourth year.
............This is just a handful of stuff, I recommend if you enjoyed the book to go and read the new version :) thanks everyone, and I am currently in midst of writing a CURSED update so be prepared. Hoping I can release a few chapters at once!!