harryfrustrations

@micaylaG1 I honestly don't know. those 6th grade years were an odd time and I was such a bad writer; I cringe when reading my old things.

Allievaska

Why mallory why not one of the babys not mallory whyyyyyy!!!! She shes suppost to live you broke my heart i am reading this and crying why mallory! !!! Please bring her back pweeeeese with LIFE on top!

Allievaska

Well another book to add to my list of "books that made me cry"
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Allievaska

Its dramatic but still mallory should have lived it breaks my heart to wknow she didnt make it
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speedy1106

Tell me, for the "You Rejected Me, I Moved On" story, how can Mallory have moved on if she ended up getting back with Gage??? That is definitely not moving on. And killing John off and then her, will have sent some of your fans running. I know I was disappointed and it killed the story for me. It started out a good story, but ended horribly.

harryfrustrations

@speedy1106 sorry I'm just seeing this now but trust me, my writing from 6th grade obviously was pretty bad :P I'm working on it though, sorry if I came off as rude in the last message!
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speedy1106

Thanks. It's a good book. Just think it has potential to be a better story.
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harryfrustrations

Well she moved on when she met John but you are right. I've considered changing the name to fit the story more but no good ideas. Thank you for your opinion, I know I ended it horribly and I'm trying to write better stories (:
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