harryspeony
CHECK OUT MY STORY BREAK!
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harryspeony
SORRY IM SPAMMING BUT PLEASE CHECK OUT MY STORY ESTATE!
harryspeony
PLEASE READ MY NEW STORY ESTATE!
harryspeony
STARTED A NEW STORY: "Estate" PLEASE CHECK IT OUT AND GIVE YOUR OPINION!
harryspeony
IMPORTANT: I WILL BE TAKING DOWN MY STORY BREAK AND MAYBE TRAIN TRACKS FOR EDITING PURPOSES!
harryspeony
Read my new story "Break" please I worked very hard on it and am looking for some constructive criticism.
alliec_123
Hey! Needing opinions/feedback on my new story! let me know what you think! It would mean alot! Thanks !
harryspeony
@alliec_123 I just realized that you don't have a typo on the cover, though I would think about using a different font so the V doesn't look like an O.
harryspeony
I really like your book! I just checked out the details just letting you know but there's a typo on the cover. I would make chapters a little bit longer and maybe add a bit more details for when your characters are speaking, just adds a little bit of understanding to the characters emotions, like make them use body language sometimes. It's really good though, the storyline is good so far overall, excellent job on your book.
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