Go check out my updated versions of my first two chapters of my book amour!!! My first and favorite of my books, which needs to be heavily and majorly redone and edited… I know. But I’m super proud of how many of you guys loved it even then. I’ve randomly got some inspiration to redesign the storyline and fix some plot holes and grammar. I think the characters need more thought and dedication, I wrote the book when I was young and had great concepts but not enough writing experience to really convey what I wanted. Let me know what you think about the first two chapters in comparison to the other, more shitty ones. Thanks loves, I appreciate it <3