Hi i read your book Can you save me alpha and here i have my views,
its a great plot and the best thing is its not predictable.
But there are some grammatical and spelling mistakes, also there are some points where the POV changes from Annie to Vincent and vise versa but you haven't mentioned it.
Work a bit more on paraphrasing and format to give it a little charm.
Also a better cover page can be made that relates with the story but that's all your choice at the end of the day.
Miss. you rocked with this book, its awesome, you are really good at imagination keep it up and keep inking.
All the best for your future books