Hey queen so remember when you said I could use Fortegreen for Eventually (squeals ty btw he's such a jerk it's perfect) I have just this brief excerpt written on him from General's pov (small ch17 spoiler there's a small General pov at the end) and anyway I wanted to hear your thoughts on it so here it is:
So, yeah, her decision to become an astronaut was very much influenced by Captain being one. She had finished her training two years ago, and she’d only been on one mission so far, but she loved her job. Even if everywhere she went, people took one look at her last name and said, “*Oh.* You’re Captain’s sister.”
People didn’t always say it happily, either. Most tones ranged from neutral to annoyed, but the worst reaction had been from her old mission leader. “Captain’s sister,” he said, sneering, like the name brought a foul taste to his mouth. Everything from his tone to his expression reeked of disapproval. He looked back at her, giving her a once-over, and made an unimpressed sound. “Well, let’s hope you’re not as incompetent as he is.”
Their first meeting, and she had already started to understand why his colleagues called him ‘Fortebitch’ behind his back.
Of course, that was back when she only thought he was a jerk. The minute she found out just how much worse the truth was… well, how could she *not* make a plan? This was her big brother. She *had* to warn him.
(Just a quick thing I'm not planning on using him again until later I just needed to introduce him in General's pov in a quick way so he wouldn't come out of nowhere later. Again tyyy for letting me use him)