heartdevilxoxo

if anyone ever wants any writing tips hmu guys

heartdevilxoxo

csm chapter was so bad it inspired me to write

noober9376

each chapter of your fic is a therapy session for me
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heartdevilxoxo

ang mensaheng ito ay maaaring nakaksakit
chainsaw man officially just fell off hard for me.
          this was such a nothing burger of a chapter.
          denji knows about yoru now, an incredibly anticlimactic way to find out
          yoru felt extremely out of character (as always)
          the whole chapter came off as shitty fanfiction (no offense to me)
          the pacing was weird
          art felt kind of awkward
          why did yoru throw the cake at yoshida?????
          did asa even SPEAK this chapter?
          this is so ass.
          like genuinely, this is so bad.
          if I read from now on, it won't be for my own enjoyment. I won't be looking forward to it.
          I'm only reading now to keep up with worldbuilding/power system facts.
          fuck part two.

kafkaobsession

chainsaw man chapters are so dissapointing nowadays,, the only good thing we got was when yoru destroyed tokyo with the statue of liberty
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heartdevilxoxo

@Spider-Mate yes man!! even if it were realistic, realistic doesnt = good..
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heartdevilxoxo

new chapter soon. sorry ive been taking a long time.

heartdevilxoxo

@noober9376 wait ill lock in slime don't worry
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heartdevilxoxo

hey. I might drop my fic.
          it feels like all it's doing is causing problems for me and not many people really seem to like it. I don't think I want to really write anymore. I'm sorry for anybody that wanted to see the end of it, but I'm considering stopping and deleting all of it.
          sorry.

_T-Aki_BestAK47_

@heartdevilxoxo  nooooo! I know it took you a while with the translation :( I'm hardly on Wattpad anymore and when I do I just update some nonsense. But I want to translate it before the end of the year.
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spinalcordsword

i like it, whatever u do, pls dont delete it :(
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heartdevilxoxo

@noober9376 thank you, that means a lot to me. this isn't an official statement saying I'm stopping it but it's just something I'm considering. frankly I will probably take this back by the end of today I just feel like my writing is doing the opposite of what I wanted it to
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