heartfeather

@MichaelWeekly  no it wasn't rushed, but their was a little bit of extra information to take in. It really is an awesome book. Keep writing, as I will be egarly awaiting your next post. I find it curious that her markings go cold when Chirstian is touching her. Is he corrupted? You don't have to answer that, it's very much optional. I think that it would be awesome if Eliza had an extra 'power'. Thx for asking, it's nice to know that you care about your readers opinions.

ArielleWeekly

Thank you for the suggestions, that's a question I can't tell you (: Okay I'm sort of rewriting the chapter so I'll definitely slow it down a bit, thank you for getting back with me and of course I love hearing what my readers have to say about it!
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heartfeather

@MichaelWeekly  no it wasn't rushed, but their was a little bit of extra information to take in. It really is an awesome book. Keep writing, as I will be egarly awaiting your next post. I find it curious that her markings go cold when Chirstian is touching her. Is he corrupted? You don't have to answer that, it's very much optional. I think that it would be awesome if Eliza had an extra 'power'. Thx for asking, it's nice to know that you care about your readers opinions.

ArielleWeekly

Thank you for the suggestions, that's a question I can't tell you (: Okay I'm sort of rewriting the chapter so I'll definitely slow it down a bit, thank you for getting back with me and of course I love hearing what my readers have to say about it!
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