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@DavidJThirteen 
          	It's great!

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@galaxy6656 
          You're welcome! I truly meant what I said. Although it would have been a good plot twist if Tamara had married Master, I wouldn't have liked it because 1) Why would she marry the man who had hurt her and her friends, 2) The result would have been horrible, and 3) If over five people disagree with your marriage, then don't marry the guy, or woman! Well, that's MY logic.

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@xxSMxx 
          I decided to change Jack's past a bit. Jack's father joined the Navy and died, as I said. After his mother married another man, his family was murdered. Jack wasn't murdered because he was at the hospital with a very bad case of pneumonia. The visiting hours were over, and his family had had to go back home, where they met some burglars. The burglars murdered his family, and Jack nearly killed himself before the Roberts came along. Is that more realistic?