Remy_Ru
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Hey sis. Thought I'd be one of the firsts to talk to you about your writing. So far I've just read the Naruto fabric and it's fairly good. :-) Your descriptions are getting much better and the intro does pull in a reader. I suggest making sure to take full advantage of spell and grammar check when possible. Something you might not have thought about; that fanfic, with a little work, could very easily become it's own unique story. :-) I'll try to post what I'm working on when I get home so you can bug me about my lack of improvement. Lol ok love ya girlie! ;-)