Heather

Your welcome :)

@eclipseprincess Your welcome :D & thanks so much for fanning!

Thank you for the dedication! !:) it means a lot!:)

@smarties58 Lol Im glad you liked it that much! thanks for fanning :D 

@heatherbby I felt really silly when I realized I forgot to fan a great story that I'M editing ;) Haha I feel extremely dumb!

For those of you that are actually reading my Fire Of Summer story, Im going to be putting it on hold to do some editing. After reading over it Im not 100% happy with the beginning so be looking for the revisions of the chapters and chapter 4 in a few weeks. I appreciate all of you that have enjoyed it enough to add it to your library, and fan me but just bare with me here lol :)Thanks, much love, heather<3

@Ani122 No problem! Anytime!

yea that was really helpful ill work on it. thanks so much for your timee :}

@Ani122 I
          n the beginning when you are describing the main character you say things like her hair is unkept and her face is oily, that made me think that maybe her and whoever she was with were on a long journey, many running away. Then as you describe the hotel area she points out someone named john's house like she knows the area that she is at. 
          Its was just unclear of what exactly was happening and was hard to figure out. 
          Maybe just describe the main character's situation a little more like her point of being with Andre, why they are at a hotel, etc..
          I hope I helped! :) 

hey can you let me know whats confusing so i can work on it :} thank