@ LennyCarlton7 Hey Lenny, thank you so much for this amazing feedback, of course I will give you advice! I am just a little excited because you are the first one to notice me. I will just say, first of, try to dig deep into the characters feelings, think about what you would feel in their situation. Second, try different Kind of words and change the way you build your sentences sometimes, it brings change in the Story. I don't really know, these two are just the main things you should focus on, I am a beginner too. Bzt thank you again,
-Sam :)
