AuroraEvermoore

Hi, I have a question about Shadowbound Hearts because I only know seasons 1 and 2 through the anime. Where does 3 fit in with your story, since you read the book, too? I don't want too many spoilers. (:

AuroraEvermoore

My pleasure. 
            I am reading Ragnarok, too, but not all chapters are online. 
            At least not on the website I'm reading. (;
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heldbyshadow

@AuroraEvermoore thank you !
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AuroraEvermoore

Alright, starting tomorrow evening, maybe earlier, I can continue reading. Good night for now. (;
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AuroraEvermoore

Hi, I'm reaching out here instead of in a chapter. 
          This doesn't belong inside a story. (: 
          
          Is it okay to point something out? Because I've noticed how much you use adverbs. Like, a lot. For one chapter only, I kept track. I've counted 70 in one chapter alone (chapter 16). 
          Maybe you are unaware of it? I'm sure you would want to know and work on it. I know I do. Most of them could be replaced with a better word, and some could be deleted. 
          
          I hope you're not too mad. In that case, I'm sorry. 
          
          You'll see my normal comments in the story. (;

AuroraEvermoore

Then, you can do something that I can't. 
            I want the story written for myself first, and I use Google Docs. So, for me, it's the rough draft, first draft, second draft, and then the editing process before I publish on Wattpad.
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heldbyshadow

@AuroraEvermoore  Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts—I really appreciate it. I just wanted to clarify that the chapters I’m publishing are far from a rough draft. I take my writing very seriously, and I put a lot of care into what I share.
            
            That said, I do value constructive feedback, so I’ll definitely take a look at the reference you mentioned. However, I plan to continue writing this book in the way I always have, since the style and direction are very intentional on my part.
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AuroraEvermoore

No, no, I'm not saying it's bad. 
            Quite the opposite. You managed to write a pretty decent rough draft. 
            
            However, writing a "rough draft" is just the first phase in the writing process. 
            It's where you turn the story from your head onto the page. There are plenty of steps in between, or even 5 to 10 drafts before a story is really finished to be published. 
            
            Even as a hobby writer, there are still things you should know because our world is ever-changing. Solo Leveling is popular now, but wait a month, and it's a different anime. (; 
            
            There are some "How to" books that could help explain things better. 
            Here's the link: 
            https://www.wattpad.com/story/30767512-how-to-write-fanfiction
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Kiyanashi

Hello!.. I've seen your conversation with a account named Sara_mark.. You don't seem new to this website but be careful out there.

Kiyanashi

you can do both, preferrably both.
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heldbyshadow

@Kiyanashi omg thanks then ! I’ll be more careful and I will block those accounts. 
            
            If I just block them it’s fine ? or I should also report them too ?
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Kiyanashi

they usually compliment a single chapter, the moment you reply to them they'll want to link up in discord or instagram..
            
            if you chose to ignore them they won't appear again, and if they don't appear again nor vote in future releases, just block or report them.
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