Fairy0001
I enjoy your book united. My only tip is to space out the events more so its not all in one day.
hemmohoranhecox
Yeah! It's been about 3-4 years since I originally wrote that book and have learned how to do that in an efficient way. I was considering going back and rewriting the entire book from the start because my style of writing is completely different (and does take into account your tip). I'm happy you liked it tho!