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Hey, I read the first couple chapters of your fanfic, and it's lookin super good! The only thing I'd say to fix is your i's, and I know that sounds weird but, it looks a lot better when they're capitalized. But other wise it's looking really good, the usage of characters and they're personalities is looking great. And I appreciate that you look up to me for advice (I honestly don't know why, my stories are shit but I love that you still asked me). Anyways it's looking great bro good luck with the rest!