herODDyssey

@Abi_Kirk86 Okk well i just gave up with this whole new theme for my book, and i really like your style of writing so would you mind editing my book. When it's all finished i really hope to start sending it to publishers. But thats only if you can. Thanks for all the help soo far. (:

herODDyssey

@Abi_Kirk86 Okk well i just gave up with this whole new theme for my book, and i really like your style of writing so would you mind editing my book. When it's all finished i really hope to start sending it to publishers. But thats only if you can. Thanks for all the help soo far. (:

herODDyssey

@Abi_Kirk86 
          THANK YOU SOOO MUCH....i really needed help. Your story Tattoo of a Black Angel was absolutely amazing and it has inspired me to keep trying. One day i hope to write like you. (: i would say read some of my stories but they turned out raunchy and i dont like them. i was trying to please the people on here and not myself, im gonna start a new story right now and when i get a good two chapters i'd like for you to read them if you don't mind. It be very helpful(:

AE_KIrk

@munchkin1234real 
          Sure thing!
          
          When you start a story its best to know the genre and then find the start, middle and the end. There really is no point in starting a story and not knowing how it's going to finish. So, once you have an idea of a story, you have a plot and you see an end, make notes.
          
          I've been telling people lately to use a spider diagram. It helps a lot to form a coherent idea and turn it into something big. 
          
          So say for e.g. you start off in the middle with a genre, "Fantasy"- break off with "witches" "wizards" "vampire" or whatever takes your fancy. Next "Setting" this could be either House, School, Abandoned building, Cemetery- and break off with its description, cold, wet, spooky, damp etc.
          
          Then come in with your characters. Male/female, hair, eyes height,- branch out and describe: irritable when cold or hungry, likes to fight, thinks girls are idiots but secretly fancies the majority of them and so forth.
          
          Once you have this you have the first stages of your book done. The next bit it detailing your plot. 
          Start at the beginning, do these people meet, does something happen at the beginning that correlates to the end? Do they live different lives but know each other in secret? Ask these questions and find out about your characters- you need to know them. They are going to inspire you to continue. I always find that I want to know what my characters would do if they were put in a difficult situation. It can be funny, boring or harrowing. 
          
          You need to ensure that there is a theme that continues through your entire story and you need to ensure it is talked about to keep the readers interested. My theme is urgency mixed in with some secrecy. This is where the twists and turns come in. Do things differently than you have read. Try and think of weird things that no one has thought of before. Be creative and ensure that you are making your target audience gripping their seat wanting more.
          
          Tie everything in with the end and you have yourself a book!

herODDyssey

Okay I know its been forever but i just uploaded part 4. so go check it out. 
          Sorry its so short when i was writing it seemed like i had written more then i guess was there. lol but still thanks for becoming a fan and keeping up with me, i'll try to stay ontop of Forbidden me from now on. Well love you guys and enjoy. (:

Celestial

Hey i know thes­e are annoying but its always ­nice to have people read your ­stories so if you have time it­ would mean a lot if you could­ read Abandoned Sanctuary and ­tell me what you honestly think 
          Much Appreciated ( 3

herODDyssey

Hey you guys i really want to write more but i need to get more story out there by getting on the What's Hots List. So please Comment and VOTTTEE!!! If you could reccommend my story to other people it would be much appreciated.Thank you. Also if you leave a comment saying you want me to read your story i'll be sure to do so. 
          
          Well off to school Loves.
          -Reecey

katary

hey i'm just wondering if your not busy if you could check out a story i'm  writing at the mo. 
          
          its a typical boy/girl/ crazyness ensues kind a story, and would appreciate  anything from a vote to becoming a fan! 
          
          thanks! 
          
          and i'll definitely read your stories!