Amirah_Rey
Hi shuniesky,
Amirah_Rey
@Shuniesky ayy.. haha lodi talaga?.. and because of that I will give you hugs, and kisses! Mwaphsss
kamisdaniti
Yesterday I finished reading your last chapter of I solemnly swear, and I have to tell you that is the first story I find interesting, good written, with a very good plot and last your chapters are longer than other stories related to yours :) :) Please update this story if you have free time I'm very pleased by it continue your good work.:):) (sorry for my English, it's not my first language)
holdorfgirl
Thanks so much xx I hope to write more soon because now I have a major plot. :) stay tuned!!
holdorfgirl
Hello there. You seem to Know what you are doing; could you help me get off the ground as a writer? Just read the first (and/or second lol) part of my historical fiction, and then give me your thoughts and suggestions. I'll read 3 parts of one of your books. Deal?
herbluesky81
Lol, I'm very glad I could be of help : D That's really awesome and I wish you good luck on your story! Thank you @holdorfgirl! I completely support you :)
holdorfgirl
OH. My. Gosh. Thank you sooooo much!!!! Your advice is super encouraging! Thanks for the tip about the typos... I'll reread it a few more times today.
About Evelyn and Christoffer: that is good advice. I'll follow it if I want it to get super romantic. Originally I was just among for a touch to make it more interesting. Plus, since Evelyn is a Christian (and Christoffer is not you will see later) that's going to bring up some tension about what's okay as far as their relationship goes. I'm looking forward to that chapter lol. Depending on what I decide the climax is, I take your advice though. Thanks!
Your thoughts and tips were really really encouraging. I'm so sorry you cried lol but I guess I'm glad I can evoke emotion. :)
Thanks again this is AMAZING xx
herbluesky81
@holdorfgirl Hi! I would really love to help but I’m not really great in giving advices. Thanks for the suggestion but it’s okay even if you don’t read my stories, lol, it’s really fine. My grammar is severely bad. I read your historical fiction (I have to decide) and it is very wonderful! I honestly cried on chapter 4 because Evelyn’s father was sent a yellow card. The moment I read it comes to timing when I actually got problems at home, lol. I will try my best to help you. Your story is awesome and it gives me facts I didn’t know about those days. I noticed some names of the characters are not spelled the same on some parts, but don’t worry. Also I noticed a chemistry between Evelyn and Christopher which is really interesting. It could be more romantic if she opens up to him and go to a secret place somewhere only they know where they share thoughts to each other about their families, that is if only you want to happen. Oh, one thing I want to share is words I got from my sister. She always reminds me these words: “Show. Don’t tell”, which hardly sank in my mind before I could even write a proper story with adjectives, haha. I find your historical fiction amazing and I’m looking forward to read new chapters. For me it doesn’t really matter if it’s short or long, the important thing is you enjoy writing it and giving your best in it. I’m sure more and more readers will spot it and continue to vote, comment, and be inspired by your story. I’m sure we all start small but later, we will be big. Checking your story parts frequently and rereading it also help in scanning typos. Nothing’s really perfect so it’s okay to have mistakes. I hope what I’ve said is okay. You can do it! Thank you @holdorfgirl! --- The Shuniesky : D
MimaJay7310
You've got interesting stories!