Hr. Jäger

I'm back! It's been a while, hasn't it? For those who wondered what happened to the original story of Ashlandia (which I imagine is not many), I deleted it and revamped the whole story while keeping the original vision. I made too many characters, to the extent that I couldn't manage them all. To the point where I didn't even enjoy reading my own story. 
          
          I have already written six chapters, and I will try to release one chapter each Sunday.  Expect the next chapter on 14 March.
          
          Please feel free to criticise or make suggestions. Enjoy the first two chapters!

Some announcement.
          
          Sorry for the late update due to cold that I have. 
          Hopefully I will recover and going back to writing as scheduled.

Dear Readers,
          
          (I know there's not much of you there, but thank you for reading my story)
          
          Now that I have much more free time. I can write the chapter's much more frequently (hopefully I can write 1 chapter every Sunday). 
          
          Once again, thank you for reading Ashlandia I hope you enjoy the story as much I enjoy writing it.
          
          Feel free to give me feedbacks and critics to help me improve as a writer.

Hai mufabil!!!
          Baca ceritaku yuk, segores luka fana.
          Vote and coment jangan lupa ya.